The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the modern issue in our society is that people are more overweight that ever before. Increasing amount of overweight people stimulate to rethink health care system and find better solution how we tackle health issues related with obesity. It is considered by some that the best way to work with this issue is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. This essay will discuss why adding more physical education can do only minor change and what is better ways to solve this problem.
Firstly, obesity problem needs to be started solve in early age through education. Children needs to know consequences of their lifestyle and diet. For example, from early age kids needs to be introduced how sugar can be addictive and high sugar consumption can lead to obesity, diabetes and other health problems. Also, in schools kids should be encouraged to maintain active lifestyle including sports and others free time physical activities. As I am concerned, healthy lifestyle lessons needs to be encouraged at schools instead of more physical education lessons.
Secondly, children nowadays spend a lot of time on their computers including surfing through social media, gaming. Big amount of them maintain inactive lifestyle preferring time spent at home instead running outside and keeping body active. In terms of this, parents suppose to have restrictions how many hours child can spend on computer. Also, family needs to maintain healthy and active lifestyle including physical activities like skying, bicycling and other sports together with children on their free time.
In this contemporary world is growing amount of overweight people. Some people believe that to tackle with this problem will help by introducing more physical education in the school curriculum, this essay discussed why this solution is not effective and why by changing children way of thinking on such a issues could do better job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...anging children way of thinking on such a issues could do better job.
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a issue' or simply 'issues'?
Suggestion: a issue; issues
...anging children way of thinking on such a issues could do better job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27741935484 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59921544234 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8309555735 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302477736166 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102178036181 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106999763647 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205199081612 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160889973129 0.056905535591 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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