Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the task countrie´s government has is to ensure safety for it´s citizens. A certain portion of the population believe that most effective way to diminish crime is prolonged penalties while some argue possible better ways to reduce crime. This essay will discuss both views and why prolonging punishment time is ineffective compare with educating people and ensuring basic support for citizens.
It is argued that lengthening punishment time or getting sentenced to the death may seem great threat for humans not to act against the law. But reality shows that prisons are still full of people even though is given long and harsh penalties already. In addition, many people do crimes without expecting to end up in the jail. For example, some counties are having much harsher punishments, even so these counties has high crime rates. For these reasons, I think we need to solve problem way before crime is conducted, to make sure that people would be educated from early age, not to lean into criminal´s life.
Children who grow up in unstable families are more likely to get into crimes later on in their lifes. I think, first of all, needs to be answered question, how we can mentally, emotionally and maybe financially support critical families who doesn´t provide happy childhood. For example, kids who lives in “proper” families, doesn´t need to deal with drunk, depressed, angry parents and can focus on school, therefore this child less likely will choose “easiest” criminal path. I believe in taking actions in early age and leading childen´s future right way.
Criminality is still massive issue in most of the countries. This essay discussed why crimes can´t be reduced by porlonging sentences duration. In my opinion, this dilemma needs to be unraveled from the deep roots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, even so, for example, i think, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26351351351 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93699825145 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2965114993 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200849000323 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698151604198 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738104174106 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129355836021 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677680426301 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.