Growing population is the big problem in the cities does government should provide home to cities or countryside?
Living in this ongoing epoch, inreasing population is becoming increasingly in many nations . Altougth, high community rate threaten to many societies ,but its effects can be combated successfuly by providing space of homes through lawmakers. This essay looks at effects of this issue and suggest some solution of this problem.
To start with, growing number of populance may cause many problems . There are deleterious aftermath are very obvious. But lack of space in order to living is countable setback which may leads to variou kind of obstacles firstly, unhygienic environment and growth of slums has become major problem is growing population . For example, number of people living in slums or roads in bathinda . Consequently , due to boosting growth of slums , reputation of cities being degraded as well as number of problems has become major issue also likewise diseases and lack of tidiness .
However ,the menace of booming population can be fought with providing best opportunity of houses is main way of tackle this problem. In addition, they can be avioded their complications ,spreading information about their effects by government. For instance , government should provide job option in villages by developing industries that is why they might be given space of homes in riral areas. Thus, i is good epoch to get rid people from dire ramifications of growing population.
In conclusion, although increasing rate of mankinds is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in short trem, there are concrete steps of giving homes in rural areas and big cities to reduce effect such as, slums and diseses on current society for get pragmatic developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31939163498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84677677656 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0452349497 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3076923077 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236393629325 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691866753564 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517432017207 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122349363712 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029383135486 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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