Some people think that one should plan detailed activities in leisure time while,others disagree.discuss both views and give your opinion.
In every cycle of life, it is necessary for one to enjoy the good fortune of life ,especially in leisure time. While some folks believe that it is necessary for a person to be accountable and plan strictly on how such a period such be spent due to personal goals, others feel it is less important as it is an awesome moment to share with friends. Specifically, I am of the opinion that it is vital for everyone to take a measure of their relaxation season as this could help in their productivity.
To begin with, there is room to have a break period in every phase of life which could run two hours per day or even at weekends depending on the type of occupation. However, the schools of thought believe that from the word 'leisure' it is the expected season to have fun with friends which also helps the mental health of mankind. For instance, the school of medicine broadcasted that the rate at which their students find themselves in critical states is very alarming due to the excessive studying, thereby leading to stress in their bodies and brain fatigue. Therefore, they advise that it is essential for people to take rest and enjoy their pleasures.
Nevertheless, for any productive individual managing and accounting for every second spent becomes a necessity and even some could prefer taking up an online course. This kind of person believes that staying idle or associating with friends at such an hour will be a time waste so they could prefer to achieve something else within that space. For instance, I have an introverted friend who believes to be indoors to learn some soft skills or attending an online course rather than going to parties. He believes that having a detailed routine during his relaxation moment makes him organised and achieves his goals.
In conclusion, while some folks feel that it is necessary to have detailed routines during their recreational hour, others argue. To this, I believe that organization and productivity can be attained when detailed descriptions and time management are portioned during relaxation hours.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or one to enjoy the good fortune of life ,especially in leisure time. While some f...
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...g due to the excessive studying, thereby leading to stress in their bodies and b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... excessive studying, thereby leading to stress in their bodies and brain fatigue...
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Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cessary to have detailed routines during their recreational hour, others argue. T...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and productivity can be attained when detailed descriptions and time managemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88352272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68116655941 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1987665035 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112080141994 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440750371584 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384951430271 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809070486234 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478845034274 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or one to enjoy the good fortune of life ,especially in leisure time. While some f...
^^
Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g due to the excessive studying, thereby leading to stress in their bodies and b...
^^
Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... excessive studying, thereby leading to stress in their bodies and brain fatigue...
^^
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cessary to have detailed routines during their recreational hour, others argue. T...
^^
Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and productivity can be attained when detailed descriptions and time managemen...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88352272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68116655941 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1987665035 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112080141994 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440750371584 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384951430271 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809070486234 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478845034274 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.