With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some that the most concerning problem is how to feed a big number of people as world population is growing, so few people consider that GM foods is a vital solution to tackle this issue. In my opinion, I believe that GM foods can help people as they can grow everywhere around the year and healthy for people organism.
Researches created different types of GM foods and the main feature is that they are adaptable for different weather conditions. Moreover, some GM foods can be planted in desert regions and in poor soil and despite harsh weather conditions, they still can give rich harvest to people. In addition, GM plants grow faster than usual plants and can give crops three or four times a year what is beneficial for people as they can eat different vegetables and fruits within a year. For example, in our country farmers started to plant GM apple trees as a result people can afford to eat them around the year for reasonable price.
Another point to consider is that gene modified foods are not harmful for people’s health. According to recent research GM foods contain the same amount of crucial vitamins and proteins also scientists modified its gene structure and such foods can be saved for longer time. Furthermore, GM foods have delicious taste and people like to eat them also such foods have beautiful appearance.
In conclusion, GM foods can be beneficial for people as they rich with crucial vitamins and can give crops around the year in different weather conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81992337165 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52907231011 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9801455424 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20522951406 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998572907304 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741463477581 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147301252679 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812821109502 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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