Happiness can be bought with money according to some people, but others believe it cant be purchased.
It has become debatable that whether happiness can be obtained via materialistic possessions like money or not. The multitudes are in favor of those who claim that none kind of happiness that derives from money is predominantly considered as a real happiness. Albeit, other individuals contradict to this belief and hold the idea that money plays a crucial role to achieve happiness. This essay argues both ideas and gives final summary.
It is generally accepted truth that nowadays it is almost impossible to visualize a good life without money that has already become the prior goal of humankinds. The rationale behind this statement is that in today’s contemporary world everyone is working and making a great struggle on the purpose of meeting their needs as fast as it is possible and earning high amount of money is the solely way to meet their needs.to be more precise, in every step of life financial actions are required. For instance, even meals that we consume or apparel that we wear are also purchased in lieu of money. In fact it is acerbic truth that no people can be happy without clothes or foods.
Nonetheless, real happiness in the life never derives from material possessions. What lies behind this argument is that real happiness means real kindness, unconditional love and other pure feelings that are unable to be purchased or superseded by money. If so, the happiness will not be real. It is due to the fact that real feelings that lead happiness should be unconditional. To illustrate, when people are in financially good condition they can easily make a friend and they are always valued but these are likely to last till you lose your money. In fact, money cannot be obstacle to be happy in this life.
To conclude, unconditional feelings that are impossible to be purchased are the reason for real happiness and none kind of happiness stems from material possessions are real happiness. No matter how much money people have, it doesn’t mean they have a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, for instance, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93805309735 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75326977004 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5238213301 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274748736816 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110376904275 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800211319164 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17850875096 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531887297378 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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