Happiness can be bought with money according to some people, but others believe it can not be purchased
Living in luxury does not guarantee peace of mind always. While some people find a positive relation between happiness and affluence, others disapprove it. In my opinion, contentment in life is linked to personal and social factors.
There is no measurable unit of happiness in life.
Money can make life easy and smooth. Spending money can make our life comfortable. However, well-balanced lifestyle, healthy relationships and job satisfaction are the key determinants that can make our life pleasurable. For example, familial disharmony and conflict may jeopardize the physical and mental health of any person despite having enough wealth. Similarly, job satisfaction is as important as being employed. Executive directors of multinational companies may find life miserable because of enormous pressure at the workplace. On the other hand, a junior level officer of the same company with limited earning can lead a happy life due to his balanced lifestyle.
There are many social factors which have a profound impact on our lives. Political turmoil and lack of social security bring sufferings and disrupt the normal rhythm of life which we can not correct by giving money.
In conclusion, financial stability is important in life, however, the other variables determine the soundness of physical and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...luxury does not guarantee peace of mind always. While some people find a positive rela...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce, others disapprove it. In my opinion, contentment in life is linked to persona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, similarly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47804878049 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91470660181 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8301508141 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2142857143 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202725488825 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694299912759 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063991169685 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867299070471 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568812128735 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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