Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Over the years, people have been debating about huge influence of emotions in our life. Some community establish firm opinion that euphoria is crucial in our being. Personally, I believe that our world is full of contradictions and every mood status has good and bad sides, however a few aspects help with self understanding.
The first thing to be considered is that joy is an elusive feeling that is hard to recognize and difficult to hold. Apparantly, crowd often sees a trick in their condition due to constant being under the pressure of life’s negativity. For example, according to statistics in Russia, over 60% feel unhappy being in useful enviroment and this means nation are not able to fully recognized cheer. Thus, tough moments overshadow the persons consciosness and hide positive things.
Moreover, every thinking person prepares life hacks in case of soul storm, which help the mood bright and shine which is a good decision. Moreover, every thinking person prepares life hacks in case of soul storm, which help mood brute and shine. In fact, bag full of money, good health, well-being of family in total create effective mind. For instance, excellent businessman Elon Mask climbed the career ladder with the already stated principles. Hence, society needs a life credo which is powerful and makes a human full of comfort.
All in all, humanity should strive for peace of mind all their life, search for new key of pleasure. We can create our rules to promote abstraction from pessimistic cycle of existence.
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- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ght and shine which is a good decision. Moreover, every thinking person prepares life ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05533596838 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60726994219 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5002887932 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570939732682 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194255397192 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224151796222 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0309585786973 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121182338994 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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