Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Personally, I agree with the idea that happiness is very important in life. Happy life brings along a healthy, productive, and efficient life. Happiness can make big improvements in people’s lives.
Happiness is what is actually what matters in life. Because happy people may achieve success easier while for unhappy people it may be challenging to achieve anything in life. Happiness gives people the motivation they need to achieve their goals that can increase people’s lifestyle conditions in order that people become more successful. Success and fulfilling dreams satisfies people. Satisfaction is the reason why people are trying so hard in the first place.
However, satisfaction can mean different things for each person. Some may call it family whereas some can call it money. For that particular reason, the definition of happiness can differ. Even though some people can become happy from the smallest things to others, those may not be plenty to make them happy. There are lots of factors in achieving happiness nevertheless it depends on the person. People from the same age group, same life goals, same culture may call happiness similar.
In conclusion, happiness what makes life better that is why it is very important. Better life provides success and satisfaction which can be different for everyone. However no matter what is satisfying for one as long as they are happy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...or unhappy people it may be challenging to achieve anything in life. Happiness gives peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...on which can be different for everyone. However no matter what is satisfying for one as...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nt for everyone. However no matter what is satisfying for one as long as they are happy.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24888888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67179506865 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3756248553 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4705882353 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328443631394 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124845601875 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113443365318 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2226367094 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768226253031 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...or unhappy people it may be challenging to achieve anything in life. Happiness gives peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...on which can be different for everyone. However no matter what is satisfying for one as...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nt for everyone. However no matter what is satisfying for one as long as they are happy.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24888888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67179506865 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3756248553 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4705882353 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328443631394 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124845601875 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113443365318 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2226367094 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768226253031 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.