I accord that having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time due have some reasons behind it. Money is required in every field of work . Money can manke luminous futur rather than waste of time nonsense matters . I will discuss all distinct metaphores in my forth coming paragraphs
To inititate, money plays a vital role in 21st century .It provides security to every human beings who lives in high society. It aids to make ‘name and fame’ in the nation . Mankind ponder that to live in a free time is not a big deal but family and parant’s futur is one of the sub substantial deal for every individual . In hodiernal era, there is a simple motto ‘ time is money’ . For instance, in western country ‘s people do not waste their time on useless matters . They cogitate How to utilise their time to earn money for luxurious lifestyle ,expensive cars, costly abode and do on.
On the contrary side , if they have preciouse time they can spent every enjoyable moments with ‘nears and dears’ .No boggle, in modern time maximum families are distracting from their relationship due to have less time and more work .
I come to my point of view I opine that money and free time should have equate balance in life . Individual should not trigger to one thing because life is like a ‘rudder boat which needs a steering wheel’ . Equal balance of time and money may relief from these arduous
In culmination, I would like to reckon that, mankind should not give more valuable time to money . Money and time should be balanced in life .Otherwise people will loose their relationship .
- Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? 61
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Task 2: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negativedevelopment?Give reasons for your answ 72
- Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion. 93
- q...The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.•You shou 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83566433566 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56164263167 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4068198006 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446037438219 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158814519434 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170516158297 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271401588306 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160811693115 0.056905535591 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.