health education is an essential aspect of community health. do you agree or disagree?
It is very important to have knowledge about how to take care of ones health. It is believed that health education is an imperative aspect to improve healthcare for community. I partially agree with above statement that it is very important for people to know how they can take care of their health, and it will come through health education.
To begin with, there are several reasons to have sound knowledge about healthcare. Firstly, being healthy is directly related to awareness ,so it is important for all to have proper health education. For example, in this corona pandemic, awareness is the key factor to stay healthy and fit since we already know that we have to wear a mask and use sanitizers. Secondly, it provides people important information about healthy diet, healthy routine and habits which we should implement in our lifestyle. Lastly, if the children are given these kind of health related tips at an early age , a lot of diseases can be prevented because many health problems are a result of an unhealthy lifestyle. For instance, nowadays kids are very much likely to have junk food. Moreover, if they know about the problems they will be going to face in future, so they may not eat these kinds of food. They will also understand that it can cause of obesity in future .
However, it is important to have health education but there are some more essential aspect that the government should be take care of. For example, in such corona pandemic, having knowledge is not enough ,but more important things like proper healthcare infrastructure, medical equipments, free healthcare for all should also be considered by the government.
In conclusion, although it is an essential aspect to educate people about health so that they can take preventive measures for themselves, but the there are some more important aspects the government should not neglect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9872611465 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6848501122 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2664110111 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220771516681 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931502217036 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105744650342 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179626021828 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813257820064 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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