Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What is your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
Nowadays obesity is one of the Major problems around the globe. Its been recorded for last few decade that people are more obese then ever before. This essay will discuss as to why this is happening and put forward some solutions.
To begin with, there are several cause of being overweight. Firstly the main reason of obesity is junk food, people are more attracted in fast food instead of having healthy food. For example, nowadays kid are very keen to have fast food like burger,french fries,pizza,while they should have some healthy food. Secondly, lack of exercise make people unhealthy and unfit,it is not they do not want to be in shape, it is all because of their lazy behavior. Some people can not get up early in the morning so that they can go for walk and go to gymnasium. Lastly, some people get obese because of their hectic life style after doing 9 to 10 hour shift and day to day work, people are almost forget about their health.
However, there are plenty of solutions we can execute to avoid obesity. Parents should keep an eye on their kids eating habits and try to avoid junk food on daily basis. They can put some healthy food on their diet and encourage kids to take a part of any sports which make them fit and healthy. Furthermore ,government should also take initiative about people health and they should have campaigns about negative impact about overweight.
In conclusion, in my opinion all because of the bad habits people have nowadays make them obese but there are some solution which can make people fit and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69343065693 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33691805551 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2336658503 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139504150128 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054942247615 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044427061619 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926947229388 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321538738301 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.