Advertisements are the popular way of marketing. They are proved to be a successful way of increasing sales. However, some people argue that advertisements influence people to purchase unnecessary things. I agree with this statement upto some extent.
Apparently, it is true that advertisements are designed in such a way so that it could win million of hearts. First of all, they highlight the merits of a product and hide its demerits. Secondly, they hire celebrities to represent their product. Since, people follow their role models thus they easily tend to buy products denoted by these celebrities.
However, people are well aware of inflation and thus they do consider their requirements before purchasing anything. Moreover due to technological advancements people have become smart consumers, that is they check reviews from internet and other sources before buying a product.
In retrospection, i can say advertisements do influence the choice of people and at the sane time it increases the sales of a product. But nowadays people have become smart consumers and they consider many things before buying anything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...gned in such a way so that it could win million of hearts. First of all, they highlight...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...celebrities to represent their product. Since, people follow their role models thus t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...equirements before purchasing anything. Moreover due to technological advancements peopl...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... buying a product. In retrospection, i can say advertisements do influence the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'first of all', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253807106599 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.192893401015 0.155533422707 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659898477157 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456852791878 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0761421319797 0.0437548338989 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111675126904 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0456852791878 0.0403226058552 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07287507154 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253807106599 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0812182741117 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010152284264 0.021408717616 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1129.0 1933.35771543 58% => OK
No of words: 177.0 316.048096192 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37853107345 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20517956788 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.418079096045 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28813559322 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237288135593 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.16384180791 0.137316102897 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07287507154 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.037074148 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 57.814361978 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 14.75 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6709732902 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 43.563559322 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.3064516129 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277095861206 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103396617465 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735296702554 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518010286485 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116985736385 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119580812703 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118176672843 0.0742795772207 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272670085724 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033515517922 0.0638462369009 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190506645009 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079011380166 0.058150111329 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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