Homeschooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society.
The benefits of homeschooling are widely discussed but yields no conclusion. Some supporters might see that this types of educations accommodate children living in the area having poor transportation, while some critics may claim that young people probably confront problems lacking of social skill if they participate in home tuition. In my opinion, I do completely agree with the latter since the drawbacks of homeschooling do outweigh their disadvantages.
However, some advocators may argue that home education having been designed by specialists could meet an individual child’s demand. Still, I found that this argument is invalid because this mentioned style of education does not pose only benefits such as online courses and man-to-man study. Therefore, it is not uncommon that teaching at home instead of sending children to school also presents serious drawbacks like insufficiency of ability helping them to deal with difficult situation, ranging from home to workplace. Is it acceptable to allow self-educated programs to impact on children’s life?
On top of that, another obvious drawback of homeschooling is that excessive expenses. The great amount of money is spent on hiring teachers, annual mineral, material and so on. This high charge tends to increase beyond parent’s salaries and cause long-term debt. Besides, the home tuition is oftentimes found participants lack of human relations. It is reported that teens enrolling online class, for example, can get higher marks in the computer-based examination, but get few marks in proposals forcing them to work in group. Although self-educated programs can create young experts who are master at a specific subject, it can not teach them to deal with their colleagues’ behaviors at all.
In conclusion, eventhough homeschooling presents some minor benefits, their cons are significant and posed in social institute. So, I would like to suggest that the individuals and the government be concerned about the advantages of this special learning type, and to advise that parents be aware that it also poses some hidden threat in long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51219512195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10968436072 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649390243902 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9698772352 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0405858758351 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186078058298 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315002732596 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0279157898604 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207955165155 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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