Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
During the last decades , human activities had a detrimental impact on ecosystem entire the world. It is asserted by some groups that there is no time to make things better and do something about it , whereas others believe that it is not too late yet , and fruitful changes can be done. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic , followed by my own take on the matter.
On the one hand , there are those reasoning , it is too late to do something. To begin with, if a specie disappear , it can never be brought back , and from begining until now, many species had been gone such as Dinosaurs and some tigers . As a result of this extinction , the balance of ecosystem has been disrupted and it can harm both environment and biodiversity as well. To be precise , species are depended to each other, so if one goes disappear , it can put other species in serious danger .
On the other hand , some people hold the view that there is still time to tackle this issue . The fundamental reason which supports this idea is that there are so many endangered species that would be disappear in a few years if appropriate approach is not taken. Hence preserving existing animals should be prioritized. Take Asian cheetah as an example which is in serious danger of extinction due to the illegal hunting.
In conclusion , there are both valid arguments on both sides of this controversy ; on balance , however it is my firm conviction that we have a responsibility to maintain our ecosystem for next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76893939394 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71223746764 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0668683808 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191325714056 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699107544328 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523940451895 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114822604088 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708211188877 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.