Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and cultures together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and cultures together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays people are around the world are passionated about the music. It is asserted by some people that music is a convenient way to gather people together from various cultures and ages. Although I agree music is a beneficial way for this approach, but I do not assume that it is going to work in all circumstances.

On the one hand, there are several reasons to think of music as a good way to gather people. First of all, music stimulates curiosity of people to know more about other nations’ culture. To elaborate more, music is a bridge among people around the world that promotes their history and culture, and make people keen about new nations which almost nothing else can do this. Another reason which supports the idea is that it promotes English as a global language, and majority of people will probably have same language. There are numerous spoken languages around the globe, and due to fact that most dominant countries in music industry are in English. Thus, they introduce English as global language, and with respect to the time more and more people will be interested in persuing that professionally. Consequently, the more people have learned English, the more they will become united from different parts of the world.

On the other hand, the reason why I hold the idea that maybe it is not the best way to make people united is that there more feasible approaches for this aim. To begin with, music does not necessarily best way to bring people closer, and other contributing factors such as similar history and culture are more important. History and culture are good ways to be aware of what truly happened in the past, and give people a sense of identity which is very valuable to individuals. Since, people with same culture will probably share same attitude and emotiones, therefore, these can make people more united.

In conclusion, it is asserted music is one of the best ways to bring various sort of people from different age groups and culture together. Despite the beneficial effects of music on people’s unification, I do believe that other factors such as history and culture are by no means negligible.

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2021-11-06 Elahe Rasooli 56 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'necessarily the best'.
Suggestion: necessarily the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, sort of, such as, first of all, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86141304348 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54712061525 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472826086957 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7977185511 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394151865245 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145099003134 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739988053219 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279899028309 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595344561851 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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