The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information about the expenditure of residents from US and Britain on fuel in three part of society including poorest, middle-income and richest.
Overall, residents of US have spent significantly more money on fuel in all their groups which an exception of richest group which spent slightly less than on UK, and the maximum amount of money spent is almost two times bigger in US. Moreover, the highest amount of income spent on fuel is accounted for poorest in US, whereas richest in UK spent the highest amount of their wage on fuel.
To begin with, the figure for British citizens has an upward trend starting from poorest at 0%, and reaching at 4% in middle group. Afterward, it has shown a fluctuation, and reaches its peak around 4% in the wealthy group. So, the more rich they are, the more they spent money on fuel.
Regarding of United States, it has an opposite pattern of UK. The proportion of salary spent starts from around 4% and reaches its highest in poor part at almost 5.5%. Then, it has experienced a gradual fall until it has ended at about 2.8% which is its bottom in rich part.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the richest'.
Suggestion: of the richest
... in all their groups which an exception of richest group which spent slightly less than on...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68341708543 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45072651535 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8854388575 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714623776615 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346557016077 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403649918203 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549653520647 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436964297643 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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