Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meat less products and meatless substitutes. Vegetarians do eat as healthy food as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
We live in competitive world. Our human body requires various foods for stay healthy. Some folk prefer meat food, where some choose vegetarian food. It is only dependent upon human beings. Now, I would like to clear idea about meat and meatless foods.
First of all, we all know that, our climate has been change due to the pollution. So, our physical body needs to nutrients, vitamins for fight against climates. Some people think that, human beings need only vegetarian’s food, but we can’t get sufficient proteins or vitamins from that. Meat has more energy and protein compare to meatless products. For an example, in cooler country, we have to eat meat products as a compulsory, because we can get more energy from that. Furthermore, non-vegetarian foods help us to maintain our body hot.
Albeit, some people don’t eat meat products, because they believe in non-violence. Folk think that, we have no rights to kill any animals, but, there are no reasons to kill them. Our body not only dependent upon one food, it requires a different food for various actions.
On the flip side, animal also like as human beings, creatures also have their own freedom. We don’t have to interfere in their particulars life. Sometimes, to eat meat food also spread a disease in human body. For an example, "swinflue" is coming from the hens. So some think that, vegetarian food has no venom, but, vegetarian food has also chemical experiment. Moreover, in market vegetarian food prevent by chemical preventives only.
In conclusion, I would like to say that, vegetarian is healthy for body from one side only, but folk needs to other foods for performing various action.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241477272727 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.142045454545 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0482954545455 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0596590909091 0.0437548338989 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0994318181818 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0113636363636 0.0403226058552 28% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.80491323668 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340909090909 0.0326793684256 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0568181818182 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113636363636 0.021408717616 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00284090909091 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1792.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310714285714 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185714285714 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117857142857 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80491323668 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.0521507962 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.3333333333 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4023569013 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 127.492653851 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.814263465372 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 38.3333333333 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.40909090909 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363001538516 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0557506545704 0.102741220458 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0803142158649 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.429988336546 0.534860350844 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14875172252 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117183036644 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684059627396 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251812276582 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0328516673772 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22003544585 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570689385147 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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