Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)
The line graph illustrates that, Honey, can sugar and fruit sugar produce acid in the mouth, which is dangerous for our teeth, in the given time.
As can be seen from the graph that, 7 PH values is the initial level of PH level. It can be reduce after eat some sweet food. When we eat Honey, PH value become 5,it has the more PH value compare to Fruit sugar and can sugar, it has 4.5 and 3.5,respectively.The value of PH level below 5.5 is the dangerous for our teeth.
After 5 minutes to 10 minutes Honey maintain their PH value constant, but Fruit sugar and can sugar countinusly swelled their PH value that means falls down their acidic effect in mouth. There are various times at which these three product become safe for mouth and that is, after eating,15 minutes for Honey,20 minutes for fruit sugar and 30 minutes for Can sugar.
It is evident from the graph that, Honey can be less harmful for teeth compare to Fruit sugar and Can sugar.
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The line graph illustrates that, Honey, ...
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...rous for our teeth, in the given time. As can be seen from the graph that, 7 PH...
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... sugar, it has 4.5 and 3.5,respectively.The value of PH level below 5.5 is the dang...
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...ow 5.5 is the dangerous for our teeth. After 5 minutes to 10 minutes Honey main...
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...it sugar and 30 minutes for Can sugar. It is evident from the graph that, Honey...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302564102564 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.138461538462 0.116061578633 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0564102564103 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0153846153846 0.0366838410393 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0512820512821 0.0131127313244 391% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117948717949 0.155750635184 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0153846153846 0.0379272487307 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.23911615776 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153846153846 0.0210936926555 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00512820512821 0.00175180941692 293% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564102564103 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307692307692 0.00437022459523 704% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205128205128 0.00967000014798 212% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1078.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.9 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19540229885 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.224137931034 0.337110787985 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.132183908046 0.247514529752 53% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.051724137931 0.171178102325 30% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0402298850575 0.112407865282 36% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.23911615776 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522988505747 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 43.590095039 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8571428571 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5227476824 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 135.714022679 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 38.0755336617 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 2.125 2.94281807926 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188136113974 0.418131533498 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.205393174343 0.181151798455 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800263674038 0.0850326197045 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.755445788334 0.706616315825 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.218614948193 0.157042692854 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110473983434 0.228904883108 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514149885313 0.108899403657 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298453019986 0.367819155151 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339286303247 0.0812612215331 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134844659 0.316326947829 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576605215336 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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