A hundred years ago, people thought that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain in all situations. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?
Improvements in life are very important part of human race. From almost hundred years before, in life humans were improving steadily in every aspects. Some of these aspects include technology, education, poverty, casteism, etc.
First of all, if we talk about the areas which have made important progress nowadays, than the area should be technology. Human race is far more progressed in every aspects of technology such as mobile phones, internet, various software, machineries, etc. Technology is one of the best thing that is improving steadily over the years, but as we go individual in each country, we can see the fluctuations in the improvements in life. Some countries had been developed twice as improved as other countries in technology. One other thing that is developing head to head with technology is medical science. Medical science had developed enough to cure almost every diseases known to the world.
Now, the under improved areas of life we should work on are education, poverty, casteism, etc. Humans are making exceptional progress in technology that, it is leading to major changes in education system nowadays, such as in this corona pandemic students were learning over internet, but it is not ideal situation for learning. We need to make more progress in our education system. Furthermore, other areas such as poverty and casteism, which are linked to each other are still needs to develop more. There are many areas in all over the world in that people treat differently of other casts' people. As remain poverty, approx. half of the people on the planet is living under the poverty line. We have to make more progress in how to decrease poverty from all over the world.
In conclusion, some aspects of life is improved in humans but, there are many more aspects that human race needs to focus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02302631579 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61506123705 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.958280867 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301364876011 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943286602722 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801635300952 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175669757049 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519867272661 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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