A hundred years ago, people thought that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems this is not certain in all situations. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?
In the present era, there are various things discovered which changed humans lifestyle. Human started to innovate new things, that made their life easier. This essay will explain, that field where human perform is valuable. And which zone they need to improve much more. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of places, where development is satisfactory. To begins with, technology is one of the best innovation, which made by mankind. That generates a reasonable impact on mankind. That makes the world smaller because all the people are connected with others through the use of the Internet. For example, the use of social media such as Facebook, Instagram, and WhatsApp are becoming very common, the people virtually connect with each other. This is the best discovery that is made by humankind.
However, there are few fields where improvement is a must need. Firstly, climate change is the biggest problem in the world, which has to be solved because that crates issue for people health. And, the depth ratio of humans is increasing. For instance, people are suffering from various diseases which never seen before. That happens because of uncertain weather. That is the main zone which has to be improved.
To conclude, this essay is about technology, which is helpful for us. Also, the human needs to aware of the climate change effect, which is harmful to the world in long runs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06751054852 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47001639026 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8918642059 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2105263158 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4736842105 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153508527328 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046153805082 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296778925112 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972123594816 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229827996086 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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