increase the word demand for oil and gas made it necessary for locating these sores in remote and untouched nature areas do you think the advantages out with the disadvantages of domaging this nature areas
In this present era, the uses of energy sources are increased therefore the world demands those sources such as oil and gas is rise. It is necessary for locating drilling sides of those sources in remote and untouched natural areas. This essay will explain both sides of this statement and also described which side dominates the most. That discussed in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of benefits of locating those sites in remote and untouched areas. First and foremost, if the drilling process of oil and gas is constructed in untouched areas such as the forest of Alaska, then the noise pollution in the urban and rural areas will reduce. Moreover, the possibility of finding a huge amount of oil and gas will increase, which fulfil the demon of the world. For example, the government of India find oil from the Arabic ocean in the last year. those are the main pros of that idea.
On the other hand, it also has some drawbacks which harm the environment. firstly if those projects move to untouched areas, then it required to cuts trees. That will create an impact on nature. secondly, that also destroy the home of various animals as well as birds too, and its population will reduce that will affect the food chain. for instance, the USA drilled oil from the Amazon forest and there, animal numbers were declined which was written by one survey of the University of Chicago.
To conclude, although drilling oil and gas from remote and untouched areas is beneficial, it has more disadvantage than pros. In my words, I strongly feel that the advantage does not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84946236559 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4681108727 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5549335218 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260260806157 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735763293723 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788729874879 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156859970817 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660479588734 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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