Hunting animals for fun is wrong.do you agree or disagree.
it is irrefutable that animals are a beautiful creature of God as it plays a pivotal role in our ecosystem.Killing animals for their enjoyment is very wrong activity.I endorse to this notion and intend to discuss my view of point in subsequent paragraphs along with appropriate examples.
To begin with,there are ample of factors behind its agreement.The first and foremost is that animals are wonderful creation of nature since it put positive effect on environment by maintaining balance.To epitomise,if animals are killed by hunters,then the amount of insects may escalate which might deteriorate the leaves of plants as well as vegetables,further results in many infectious and dreadful problems.Apart from this,animals not only good for ecosystem but also complete the some basic amenities of human thereby it can not be killed by humans.As a matter of it, some species of animals are limited in numbers, disappreance of endangered species may harmful for environment. For instance, according to one survey, the amount of tigre may decrease day-by-day. Due to it, herbivores are increased and eat a significant amount of plants as well as grass.
To substantiate further, today, most people's income based on dairy products. To illustrate this, in villages, people have cows, goats nd buffaloes ,they sell their milk and its products for survival, resulting in, strengthen the economy of country .
On the flip side, hunting is important but up to certain extent. most of the product such as medicines ,jewellery are made from animals. Likewise, increasing number of animals in greater extent also harmful for people.
To sum up,i would like to emphasize that ,although there could be a few challenges in this development but this choice is quite fruitful in terms of maintaining ecosystem ,getting income as well as to save species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, may, so, then, well, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29692832765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12621858327 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.585902537 49.4020404114 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156057951755 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517463377351 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507901214797 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760262384922 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513289333815 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.