Some parents prefer to have their children be raised by their grandparents Some prefer to raise them on their own Which would you prefer and why Include specific details and examples to support your choice

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...at children can rear better themeselves.This essay shall delve with both view points...
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...ve with both view points along with some examples. To begin with ,on the one ...
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...environment. To substantiate further ,children also give care and respect to t...
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...nts as they always rely on mobile phones .More than that,older people do not feel ...
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...es to their children On the flip side ,bringing by parents is best and not gran...
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... by parents is best and not grandparents .Firstly,they may better understand their...
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...ts is best and not grandparents .Firstly,they may better understand their children by...
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...by observing their behaviour and habits.Likewise,feeling of warmth love and interpersona...
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...on to get success and career development .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, likewise, may, so, well, as well as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58367346939 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66844187553 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.309270771 49.4020404114 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.0 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.25 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159894833229 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828720236168 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464311544915 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847964804227 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362319811892 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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