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These days, people are less aware of the importance of the natural world. This phenomenon happens due to several reasons, and feasible solutions could be proposed to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the fact that people have a severe lack of understanding when it comes to the role that nature plays in human life in this modern era can be attributed to a number of reasons. First of all, most metropolitan areas are nothing more than concrete jungles in this day and age, devoid of any significant amount of nature. Consequently, people are not close to nature, and therefore, they do not appreciate or understand its significance. Besides, children these days always spend their spare time gluing their eyes on a smartphone or TV screen, while adults are endlessly working or pursuing other leisure activities, which might disconnect them from nature. Furthermore, the importance of nature is not taught carefully in schools. Such subjects do not hold great importance in most schools, which does not enable them to raise their awareness about the importance of the natural world.
Various actions need to be taken to deal with this problem. Firstly, cities need to be greener. Governments should incorporate large green space into modern cities, which will encourage people to spend more time in nature rather than stare at a smartphone or computer screen. Streets should be lined with trees, and large parks should be built in every neighborhood. In addition, and most importantly, children must be taught about the importance of nature to the human race. Such subjects have to be a compulsory part of every child's education in order to ensure that future generations are well aware of the importance of the natural world and how to live in harmony with it.
In conclusion, the little awareness of the importance of the natural world nowadays is caused by some elements and governments should come up with various solutions to deal with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04320987654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70344296617 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1440134758 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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