I love music
In this day and age, the dominance of technological advances has revolutionized education in many aspects, leading to the fact that computer-based courses are widely replacing the traditional classes in many universities. Although the benefits of this trend are varied, in my opinion, its drawbacks are more significant and should not be ignored.
On the one hand, offering online courses for university students can be advantageous to some extent. To be more specific, courses based on Internet platforms provide learners with more flexibility as they can get access to the lessons from anywhere according to their own schedule, as long as Wifi connection is available. In fact, students nowadays can make use of their time when waiting for a bus or sitting on a bus to access the course and acquire knowledge. Besides that, it is true that the cost of online courses are much cheaper than the traditional learning models. Instead of paying extra money for facilities on campus, which is quite expensive, students can pay smaller amount of fee for the online courses.
On the other hand, I hold a firm belief that the disadvantages eclipse the advantages mentioned above. First of all, in order to achieve good academic results, intensive self-discipline is required. Learners seem to be easily distracted by surroundings such as surfing Facebook or listening to music, which have negative impacts on their concentration and efficiency. In addition, the lack of face-to-face interaction and peer support can demotivate online students. If learners do not understand the lessons, it will be difficult for them to ask teachers or friends and then be explained as clearly as in traditional classrooms. Consequently, they get confused and have no motivation to finish the course as they cannot catch up with the course and make progress.
In conclusion, because of aforementioned reasons, it seems to me that the merits of online classes are surpassed by the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21766561514 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0841314775 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0752480991 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0200913998305 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00704186473678 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253898043834 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0102862171819 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178162507768 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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