Most often we observe people undergo stress and anxiety due to work, if given an oppurtunity to choose between life without work and working a lot, it is quite obvious that a person would choose the first one over the later one. But in my opinion it would be better if a person chose to spend a lot of time doing the work he loves the most rather than wasting time meaninglessly.
It is commonly observed that people would choose comfortable and work free life over working. This thought usually arises in the minds of people who are less exposed to do the work they love. They do not realize that keeping themselves from working will adversely affect their mind development by restraining it from working and eventually make them lazy or reduce their innovative way of thinking. On the other hand, people who choose to work will constantly think of solving the problems that arise during their work and hence, help in mental development and also prevent their minds from overthinking about anything.
Anyway, this problem can be solved by people realizing their dreams, setting goals for their lives and constantly working towards reaching it and find happiness in success. Doing the work they love will also motivate them to work hard, which in turn lead to working a lot. This will also be very helpful for country growth, as the ideas arising during the process will indirectly promote people to gratify their country by doing something useful to others, by providing jobs to unemployed.
In conclusion, I would say that it is important for a person to choose dreams and work a lot over sitting quietly and wasting time without working. This decision in terms of above ideas proves to be efficient and useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, hence, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82094594595 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41806709673 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1730560664 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363863176093 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156004412891 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107301631768 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238650039468 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961329848221 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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