If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, we are living in the world where advertising is a heated topic and often discussed. Some argue that using advertisement has little to no impact on promoting a product on the market as customers purchase when a good quality product satisfied with their needs and requirements. This essay will explain the reasons behind my argument that I disagree with this opinion.
Firstly, the main reason why advertising is important is that many products still need advertisement in order to attract customers’ attention. It plays a vital role in introducing of new product in the market by making customers aware of the product and generating a high level of interest and demend to buy. For example, newly inventions like robots need to advertise for more adult people. Additionally, thanks to advertising, companies can tell their customers about their products. Therefore, they can sell more products to earn more profits. For customers, they will know more manufacturers and they have more options to select products according to their needs with the best price.
Secondly, another reason is that there is a plenty of the same products from multiple manufactures these days, there is no chance for small companies to compete with bigger ones without advertising. Advertising is considered as a perfect solution for all companies. Moreover, advertising is a form of modern art and people can enjoy from these adverts.
In conclusion, items can be sold easily for its quality and individuals’ needs. However, I disagree with this statement that advertising is unnecessary and it is not only for entertainment purposes. Advertising is a key part of modern business.
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- If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- the line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in china between 1982 and 2006 73
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- The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in china between 1982 and 2006 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25367647059 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06512492548 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.537091109 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217915224557 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703956986587 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350553172078 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126934787932 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180687934889 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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