immigration has a major impact on the society
what are the main reasons of immigartion
to what consequences can it lead?
Nowadays, the majority of people migrate from one place to another place just because of a living better life and future career and there are a lot of reasons for why abundant of people go to out of the country and also there are also some consequences related to this trend.
To begin with, there are predominant reasons for migrating from one country to another, first and foremost reason in abroad country they have a plethora of opportunities for their good education in university and scholarship after that they have better job application and also tack high salary so they can fulfill their dream. second reason, immensely people like travel freak person and they can explore the different places and also they can learn new culture and also a western tradition and apart from new languages hence easily to cooperate with each everyone and also improve their business marketing skills.
Moreover, there are also many more drawbacks due to the immigrants, firstly decrease the economic level for many developing countries. for instance, in Indian people go to overseas countries such as the USA and UK and also Canada for their higher education because they think that they give good scholarships and camps so they decide to go foreign secondly if people migrate the other country so they have lost their culture and tradition and also destroy the history and they can not learn properly related history so there are consequences arise.
In recapitulation, migrating community is a good way to living a standard lifestyle and also it is more beneficial for our life and also our children but some drawbacks, not neglect for our culture and traditional
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963898917 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59047345567 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519855595668 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1940683508 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 230.666666667 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063841175626 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363953814201 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286750590088 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425590720439 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309850579577 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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