Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
In the modern society the situations when the population of one country enters into another for temporary or permanent residence have become quite common. The issue of whether the immigration influences community or not strongly affects citizen lives has always aroused sharp disputes. In this essay some reasons of people movement from one country to another and also further effects of such displacements will be considered.
First of all, the phenomenon of immigration may appear from radical different sources. Economic problems have always been an immigration motivator, because existence in poverty and despair forces people to find a way out. For example, the differences between developed countries and third world countries has been increasing for the last years, that is why humans transit to industrialized countries to receive stable profit. Moreover, the main part of individuals migrates to other nations because of natural catastrophes, such as hurricanes and floods. For instance, in Japan natural disasters drive people to leave their native livings to find a safety place. Nevertheless, sometimes immigration has positive causes such as family reunion or creating a business. Thus, the people migration from place to place is caused by both negative and positive reasons, which have quite different nature.
The immigration process has both advantages and disadvantages for society live conditions. After immigration people obtain more opportunities for education, better living conditions, security and confidence in their future. However, quite often immigration causes discontent among native citizens, which lead to racism, antagonism and other social problems. Thus, the balance control of migrations is crucial aspect for well-being of people.
To conclude, I consider that people will always change their living places because of various issues and the right control of the immigration process is the key point in community well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72354948805 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87835349969 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4800769945 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125415694615 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476927138666 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385989385096 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792577274015 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267170573117 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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