Immigration has a major impasse on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequence can it lead?
Nowdays, Immigration has a great impact on the society, each year more and more people from all over the world go to the abroad . This essay will show the reasons and consequences of immigration.
First of all, mostly students leave their home and move to foreign countries for their further studies and also for making their better future and enjoy a healthy and safe life because in our country lack of works or jobs for the educated people who are well qualified are still without works. Due to unemployment students wants to immigrate to make future life better. In our home country there is also increase in the level of crime daybyday. One's life does not completely safe and people want to make their life secure.
Beside this part there is also negative result of moving to another country because sometimes people choose the wrong or illegal way for migrate due to this wrong way sometime person lose his life through crossing the border area and also deport due to illegal working. Immigration has also a negative impact on one's life when he not able to take any work for fullfill his basic needs. When students go to abroad he also do work for his need as well as study so it become double pressure on students.
To conclude, immigration is the best way for the students for making their life better in future and live happy and their is some of the problems which are faced by person's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63453815261 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26720621029 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2863002012 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645268709134 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386192603 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409251599952 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551224912684 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371949268088 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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