Air transport is the most comfortable and fastest mode of transportation from one place to another. However due to its adverse effects on environment, some people believe that imposing tax on flight users could reduce the number of frequent flyers and the flights. I do not agree with this statement completely. This statement has more disadvantages than the advantages it can provide.
To begin, with levying tax, reduces the number of official travels and these people could find other ways such as video conferences for their meetings and proceedings. Contrastly, it has an impact on tourists traveling for vacations and could adversely affects the countries or peoples depending on tourism as their economic backbone. Levying tax adds burden among people seeking flight for emergency health needs. Also, it creates shortage in movement of goods and cargo from one country to another. Overall, when the frequent flyers drop in number, it creates unemployment and pay cuts for those who are related with air transportation and aviations.
In conclusion, instead of proposing levying tax scheme, measures such as reducing the charter flights, maximizing seat occupancy before departure, imposing tax for personal charter flight users, monitoring and maintenance of optimal emission from the flights and use of biofuels could help to preserve the environment from adverse effects of flights.
- Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution others think there are some other ways Discuss both views and give your own opinion 85
- The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights To what extent do you think th 52
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Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82768439536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4099508555 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301005179648 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108139197963 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619348616855 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188023149064 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674758092344 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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