Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
Health and educations plays key role in one's life as well as improves the economy of the country. Whereas, Trading of goods are essential to enhance growth of the nation. In addition, it enlarges the quality of life. This essay will discuss the importance of these sectors and why the richer countries should help the poor nations.
The important factor in everyone life is health, for instance if we have everything in life but lacks good health it's differently not a good sign of living. On the other hand education holds the same share, Educated citizens upholds and put the country in better place. However, trade doesn't impact ones nature but creates a huge impact in GDP of the country.
In my point of view government must play a major role in improving individual health conditions and educational, trading skills. Although it has various problems, one of those is insufficient budget of country. poverty, illiteracy takes the next seat. I believe the effective solution is getting financial help from the richer countries.Furthermore, it support economy and prosperity of the dependent nation. Evidences show that poor countries becoming poorer because of financial aid, if supporting hands are there we can see great future development in the world.
In conclusion, Either rich or poor both have the same feeling, emotions for their country, To light up to this topic minimum needs to be provided for the people of country like education and health, which supports to live better and happy life. I suppose the larger economic countries have responsibility in giving brother and sister nations what they require and safeguarding minimum fundamental rights of people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83215806336 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8051868201 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286053866828 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768577203146 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438001450711 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154282795826 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350813592184 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.