With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

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...use of the huge demand of energy sources,some companies are pushed to search for oil ...
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...gas in abandoned and uninhabited places.In my opinion,the advantages for that acti...
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...ned and uninhabited places.In my opinion,the advantages for that action by far outwe...
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...not be our only solution for the problem,because not all remote places are to be damaged...
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...ll remote places are to be damaged. The advantages are quite clear,and that ...
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...ed. The advantages are quite clear,and that is to find energy to be used acros...
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...ind energy to be used across the country,in factories,homes,and schools,etc.Thus,bo...
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...e country,in factories,homes,and schools,etc.Thus,boosting the economy,stabilizing t...
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...ntry,in factories,homes,and schools,etc.Thus,boosting the economy,stabilizing the co...
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...nd schools,etc.Thus,boosting the economy,stabilizing the countrys condition,and making oil a...
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...onomy,stabilizing the countrys condition,and making oil and electricity cheaper for ...
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...ectricity cheaper for the citizens. On the other hand,disadvantages may vary...
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...or the citizens. On the other hand,disadvantages may vary from a place to another;Depend...
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...mportance and the history it might hold.For example,we can not look for oil or gas ...
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...nd the history it might hold.For example,we can not look for oil or gas in a land t...
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...stroys the land;Therefore lessening the crops outcome,hurting the economy even more,w...
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...nd;Therefore lessening the crops outcome,hurting the economy even more,which contradicts...
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...ps outcome,hurting the economy even more,which contradicts with the main goal of the w...
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... main goal of the whole process itself. Some other solution would be locating ...
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...on would be locating and using renewable,more clean means of energy,such as:'the...
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...ing renewable,more clean means of energy,such as:'the energy of the sun,the ener...
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...ergy,such as:'the energy of the sun,the energy of the wind,producing electricit...
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...energy of the sun,the energy of the wind,producing electricity from rivers and falls.It is...
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...ucing electricity from rivers and falls.It is obvious that those are a better sour...
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...s obvious that those are a better source,although,in fact a lot more expensive.That being...
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...e,although,in fact a lot more expensive.That being said,it is indeed a way more prom...
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...act a lot more expensive.That being said,it is indeed a way more promising investme...
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...eed a way more promising investment. As to sum it up,a high demand of energy ...
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...omising investment. As to sum it up,a high demand of energy requires more pla...
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...eas to be investigated for such sources.Although,those places do not need to be complete...
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...e investigated for such sources.Although,those places do not need to be completely dam...
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...need to be completely damaged;Parallelly,looking for more clean and safer sources for fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73568281938 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.39923813883 2.80592935109 157% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0033961176 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 260.4 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316839436172 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164001868001 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833043401441 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164001868001 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833043401441 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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