some individuals do activities which are considered as anti-social and criminal. society as a whole should be blamed for their activities
what is the cause of anti-social activities
who are responsible for their anti-social behavior
Certain people tend to engage in activities that are seen by society as "anti-social", and the blame should be put on the entire society as a whole.
it is believe by many that "anti-social" activities are a product of "bad personality" or "a faulty mindset";While that could be true, in most of the cases "anti-social activities" are a cause of harm,trauma or rejection;Especially when the rejection and harm is coming from those close to you, such as: family or friends.it could happen in any shape or form:an emotional harm,bullying,or perhaps a death of a loved one.
While some say that the responsiblity of the anti-social activities that a person does is on the society as a whole;it can be said that the responsibility does not only lay on the society, but also the family, and the person suffering from such acts. For example, an individual suffering from bullying could either talk about it with someone he trusts, or stay shut and suffer alone;Ultimately, causing the anti-social behaviour to spike up.
The responsibility of the society is summed in a simple word, and that is "mindset".society and the government should work hand in hand to simply advocate and raise awareness of the actions a person might do.A tv show or a podcast would definitely do the trick.
In conclusion, the cause of anti-social activities is the way a person deals with the factors that affect him,and those factors are indeed major.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.04316982357 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.079634657 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.666666667 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314085568218 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176850766025 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643594571143 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188354475838 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796356313215 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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