An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people want to change the way they look? Is this a positive or negative development?
With the development of information technology, everything in the world develops sharply, even the beauty standard. The number of people who try to catch up with this standard by choosing plastic surgery has increased. Honestly, it is not a good development for people to improve themselves in this way.
Many people keep catching up with beauty standards in their society because they are under social pressure. Living a world where every single person has to compare themself with others and always show off that they are better than others. If someone is different from the existing standard, that person will receive many negative comments. Consequently, the person will choose suicide because they cannot bear those judgements. Moreover, plastic surgery is also a way for people to keep their youth. Most people are scared of being old and having wrinkles on their faces. Hence, people now find plastic surgery as the only option to make them better.
However, this trend can lead to the existence of unrealistic beauty standards and health risks. An increasing number of people choosing plastic surgery as an option will make others in society think that the world now turns out to be more beautiful. Ingtagibly, it creates an unreal mindset about human beauty. Day by day, people tend to discriminate and prejudice other based on their different appearance. In addition, those surgeries cost a lot of money and may come with significant health risks, including infection and bleeding. No doctors can make sure that the surgery will occur without any mistakes. In case of any troubles, patients are not able to blame the doctor because they are the ones who want to carry that plastic surgery.
In conclusion, social pressure and the desire to keep youth are two reasons that people want to improve their outside beauty. However, it contains several drawbacks if this trend of society goes on rising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, honestly, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08917197452 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52044260763 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7611302934 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1052631579 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350698838022 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102493244645 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810160220128 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210412158089 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701571946811 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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