It is obvious to see that traffic and pollution have become huge problems almost everywhere. I quite agree that increasing the petrol price is considerably effect, but people still need more to handle these problems thoroughly.
There is an undeniable fact that when the gasoline price soared, a range of national key issues would be reduced maximally. About traffic, in order to save the cost of living, people will choose some transportations like bus, taxi. Thus, the number of vehicles poured into the street will be gradually limited, followed by minimizing the traffic congestion in large cities such as Ho Chi Minh City, Hanoi capital, Haiphong. Moreover, if vehicles were not common, the number of smokers would be eliminated, and the atmosphere would be cleared.
On the other hand, when the gas price is higher, a range of the other items like foods, waters, electricity will simultaneously be increased, too. The people living will get a lot of difficulties. Some of the noticeable impacts are uncertainty in daily life, lack of material possessions, especially in the countryside. For example, raising gasoline prize to lead to the rise of the tuition fee. The middle-class families are not afraid to send their children into private schools, while rural families cannot afford the school fees for them. Many students also drop out of school, come to large cities and make money to support their families. Finally, they cannot get a good job, miss the future even lured by the bad guys and then fall into the social crimes.
In addition to raising the petrol price, people should be educated about the environmental protections, parallel with using the transportations every day, keeping the surrounding environment clean, so the traffic and pollution issues will be improved.
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summaries the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summaries the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 84
- increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems to what extent do you agree or disagree what other measures do you think might be effective 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... living will get a lot of difficulties. Some of the noticeable impacts are uncertainty in d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17525773196 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79450966272 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4728708779 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143764343354 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444967497431 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508058320347 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101901314626 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568358547504 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.