Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested that increment in price of petrol could be one of the ways to solve growing concerned of today that is increased in traffic and pollution.Yet,I totally disagree on this ,In my opinion there are several other factor that could be the possible reason for this problem.
One of the main cause can be lack of proper infrastructure development in road ways . The roads are generally narrow along with poor condition. Due to this vehicle movement gets obstacle leading to more jam.Similarly there are no flyover and under passes, as these could be alternative roadway for minimizing the transport run in the road.On the same way there is no systematic management of parking .As a result the vehicle are seen parked occuping the road side space of road.Thus this makes road more conjusted making again difficulties in smooth run of transportation.
likewise, the cause of pollution is not only due to vehicle.there are other multiple reason for this.firstly the main source of pollution is industralization. Many large industry are producing harmful gases deteriorating our environment condition as well as large waste.Thus this industry are the cause of air,water as well as land pollution.
however,the idea of rising the price right worked for certain period but it isnot permanent solution at all.Thus this can be varified recent blokade that nepal had faced.Though the price was maximum but the demand of it didnot go down or nor on its uses.So, we should think of other measures like we can go for alternative of this child.Electric vehicle can be one option as it is environment friendly and government must also emphasize on the use of it as wellas on the use of public transport.Hence,for emphasing the geneal public on this many things like reducing the transport fare and make it more spacious can be done.Also higher tax rate can be imposed on private vahicle.
In conclusion theses proplem could be solved only if government authority take step in development of roadway and public transportation.Thus government should amke aware about the importance of the use of public transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1325648415 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16100705208 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.568484817 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.625 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.375 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.125 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884284138763 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443759419349 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563203297629 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059001513038 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623129981076 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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