Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree?
Today people are facing lots of environmental problems.It is argued that if the price of petrol will be increase than the issues like traffic jams and pollution will be decrease automatically. I agree with this statement. I am going to explain my point of view in further paragraphs with suitable examples. There are the various reasons which compelled me to agree with this statement .Firstly, if the diesel will be expensive than people will not use their private transport more they will go outside just to complete their necessary works and to drop their children into school. So due to this traffic on the road will be less and people will not face the problem of traffic jamp.this fact can be better explain with the help of an example that i was listening to BBC news it revealed that in germany people do not face the problem of traffic jam because their fuel is expensive so people do not go outside more. my other supporting point with it that when people will not go outside more on their veichels then the smoke which come from the cars due to burning of fuel will be not.so pollution will be automatically reduce.for instance, i was going through an article which was published by NewYork Times that in london people do not get more diseases because there is no pollution. To conclude, it is clear in the above essay that if the price of the fuel will be reduce then the problem of environment like pollution and problem of traffic jam will automatically reduce.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Incresing the price of petrol directly way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65517241379 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54082793189 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.775381806 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.571428571 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109131049692 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065184404994 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474878261707 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109131049692 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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