It is a widely held belief that environmental issues can be solved only by huge companies and governments and common people can't change the situation by themselves. I personally agree with this statement, because these powerful structures have resources to effectively deal with this problem and they are an important part of our culture and society, therefore, they can affect our way of living and values.
First and foremost, government and large commercial organizations possesses resources, such as money and workforce and therefore, they can use it in order to protect the environment. Moreover, they can control people by their influence and reputation. For instance, the sorting of garbage came along only about a decade ago. In Italy and Germany, it is the government who has implemented the law that obligates citizens to sort wastes. Even though someone might deny environmental concerns, he or she would be charged in case of violation.
Furthermore, these organizations are widely integrated in our community. They are playing an important role in our culture and society. As a result, their actions and policies impacts our lifestyle and points of view. For instance, nowadays more and more businesses decided to become more environmentally friendly by using recycled materials and reducing the wastes in their production. In my opinion, such a policy encourages people to support not only green business, but also change their way of living to be more ecologically friendly.
To sum up, the environmental issues are growing every year and we must protect our planet, but without help of such strong companies as governments and large companies we can’t make a difference.
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six month period in 2011 78
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views and 73
- The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 73
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...anies and governments and common people cant change the situation by themselves. I p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28996282528 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0195943895 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5173691687 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137204861537 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461327159101 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458450635852 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932091243766 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442974851782 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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