Many people hold the view that keeping animals in zoos are unethical and it should be radically changed, while others claim that they can serve as protection for wild animals. In my opinion, there would be no need to completely shut down zoos if we could modify the idea of it.
There is a common belief that humans have no rights to capture and confine animals, even if this species is endangered. In addition, there are no zoo that can be compared to the wild, because it’s impossible to recreate the natural habitat in enclosure. Many species exist in various weather conditions and it’s hard to provide them all with suitable environment in tiny cages. Finally, huge animals, for instance elephants or giraffes, suffer from stress and boredom in enclosure.
On the other hand, there are still a lot of advantages of zoos. Nowadays it is promoting education of community by bringing people and animals together and connection of the society with the part of the wildlife. Another point is that by keeping endangered species in safe environment we protect them from threats they face in wild, such as poachers or predators. Furthermore, there are a lot captive breeding programs in zoos. In the wild these species might have troubles with breeding and they could die out.
To conclude, the ethic aspect of zoos is still very controversial topic of discussion. Although views differ, I believe that this problem might be solved by transferring endangered species to the national parks that are protected from threatens for animals. That doesn’t mean that it would be necessary to completely close zoos. I think that small creatures like rodents or insects can stay in enclosure and still connect visitors with the part of the wildlife.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'zoos'?
Suggestion: zoos
...s endangered. In addition, there are no zoo that can be compared to the wild, becau...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'captives'?
Suggestion: captives
...predators. Furthermore, there are a lot captive breeding programs in zoos. In the wild ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97945205479 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6324547436 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7826773733 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254665703332 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740259918807 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752123367515 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160220210105 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103891942625 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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