Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that governments and big corporations' operations are the only factors that have enormous and positive impacts on environmental protection, while each person plays no role in this issue. Though I have no denied opinion on the responsibility of the governments, I completely disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, authorities and organizations are considered the high determination for the worldwide positive changes to the habitat of all species. In terms of the legal, policymakers could enact the environment-related law such as heavily fine or punishment for violations of environmental regulations. From the economic perspective, governments can also collect the strength from a variety of resources such as international companies, non-government organizations, charity programs, different levels of enforcement from national to local authorities.
On the other hand, it is obviously understood that without the participation of individuals, environment protection could not be optimized. Firstly, there has been a number of effective programs taken by groups of persons, which considerably contribute to the fight again pollution, including polluting in air, water, and noise. Local charity programs in collecting the rubbish alongside the beaches in Da Nang city, which was hosted by students of a university there, can be seen as a typical example. Secondly, regarding the cause and effect relationship, statistics analyzed by recent research have shown that the negative impact of each individual’s activities was recognized, such as littering, unseparated rubbish into different types or over-consumption of plastic bags, contributed to the severe pollution on the earth.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both governments, large companies as well as individuals should take environmental protection into consideration, while the small actions should be started by each person.
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- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should writ 78
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... that both governments, large companies as well as individuals should take environmental p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85053380783 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59498601792 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640569395018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5799453738 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.4 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112497129972 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363058311613 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323080532863 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654572133825 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207300283986 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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