Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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...nations is responsible for protection of the environment. Some people think that ...
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... duty of large companies and the leaders ,and not citizens.I tend to disagree wit...
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...anies and the leaders ,and not citizens.I tend to disagree with this point of vi...
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...nies and the leaders ,and not citizens.I tend to disagree with this point of view...
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...ertain people that big companies and the leaders are in a better position to prot...
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...er position to protect the surroundings.They claim that government have the power to...
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...ions that guides members of the society.This can be achieved by setting penalties an...
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...banning old vehicles and generators that can emit carbon monoxide gases which are...
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...anies can also be of help to the society by ensuring that the location of indust...
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...ociety by ensuring that the location of industries are far away from the reside...
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...ocation of industries are far away from the residential homes to reduce noise po...
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...idential homes to reduce noise pollution ,which can cause deafness to members of t...
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...y, ensuring waste products, such as oils,contaminated water and plastics are properly dispos...
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...cts, such as oils,contaminated water and plastics are properly disposed off to av...
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...believe that the individuals also have a significant role to play in the health o...
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...e health of the surrounding environment.Firstly,by environmental campaign thus informi...
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...h of the surrounding environment.Firstly,by environmental campaign thus informing ...
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...onment.Firstly,by environmental campaign thus informing the members of the popula...
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...rming the members of the populace of the benefits of reducing the usage of pri...
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...bers of the populace of the benefits of reducing the usage of private vehicles...
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...pulace of the benefits of reducing the usage of private vehicles and use more ...
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...of the benefits of reducing the usage of private vehicles and use more of comm...
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...ehicles and use more of commercial buses,this therefore reduces the emission of carb...
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...s,this therefore reduces the emission of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere , preve...
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...ion of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere , prevents traffic congestion . Secondl...
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...atmosphere , prevents traffic congestion . Secondly, sanitation programmes perfo...
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...d by the citizens which involves picking up of dirts in the surroundings,ensuring...
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...picking up of dirts in the surroundings,ensuring that the waters are drained properly to...
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...as a means of transmission of infection.For Instance providing a well fitted lid fo...
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... well fitted lid for disposal of refuse.By doing this,the health of the environmen...
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...lid for disposal of refuse.By doing this,the health of the environment is guaranteed...
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...eved by team work from the populace. In conclusion , although the states can ...
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... from the populace. In conclusion , although the states can guard the ecosy...
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...hough the states can guard the ecosystem ,I believe that the members of the popul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36070381232 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32796786831 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.728102314 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.142857143 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.7142857143 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4285714286 7.06120827912 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195027702729 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837614613549 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0149239567501 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901098842976 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205750729455 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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