Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases crime and violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the citizens should not be allowed to carry guns as the percentage of crime and violence in society can increase gradually. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits and practical for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearance of modern technology that numerous people have replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots and the numbers of unemployment or homeless people have rose dramtically, so dangerous weapon's banned is greatly significant for the society. Not only does this phenomenom provide high quality habit for the adolesence which improve their mentality life and cognitive systerm, but also the propotion of death people in their country will be reduced, developing the economic background. Furthermore, the socioeocomic troubles can be narrowed where all individuals can live under the peaceful enviroment. To illustrate, there was a survey by Climer Lee, the famous interviewer and professor, who is an expert about the success of european countries where their government have appropriate weapon's plans. The statistics demonstrated that nearly every countries have got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for their improvement. If individuals do not have any mechanism for self surviv, they will have to depend on the supported of government which decrease their creative, imaginative and independent abilities. Moreover, many government take advantage from military's investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspects for the society. The government need to have clear plans to redouble their citizens for the nation's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42156862745 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92474166421 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.203920004 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12190294723 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514733568641 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112449181997 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088907581018 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954050439033 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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