The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. what do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?
An imbalance between developed and underdeveloped nations has been observed for many decades.But due to certain factors,this gap is widening with the passage of time. Integration of international bodies and industrialised nations can offer a helping hand to poor nations to bridge this gap.
Poor nations are often plagued by corruption and civil unrest.This limits their investment towards building an educated, productive and healthy society. It can be seen by lower rates of educational institutions, multinational companies and medical facilities in such countries.Secondly, the disrespectful attitude of citizens towards society, rules and regulations and remuneration of taxes impedes the growth of poor nations.This factor takes birth due to income inequality which does not allow them to fulfill their basic needs.
Due to this gap,citizens of poor countries often migrate to first world countries for better education, employement and standard of living. Thus, this trend directly affects the gross domestic product of these nations; as the movement of young generation empowers rich nations but endangers the economy of poor nations. Moreover, rising trade barriers restrict the access to trade which further puts poor nations in a situation of financial loss.
An industrialised nation should provide an economic aid to poor nations to eradicate poverty and improve their lifestyle.With the help of financial assistance,these countries can alleviate education and medical facilities. Moreover,free trade should be promoted to reduce barriers of import and export.This will pave the way to develop their local markets successfully.
In conclusion, the rising gap is a matter of concern for the global trade and peace. Hence, combined efforts of society and nations are suggested to eliminate this concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79259259259 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23391662466 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3474505021 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160735955237 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641215457204 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314156417761 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908434222395 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339646322945 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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