Influence of human beings on worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity what are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity what solutions can you suggest

It is true that many animal species are being extinct and their varieties are impacted because of human interference on their ecosystems. Excess animal hunting and destroying their natural habitats are some of the major causes why the animals these days lack variations in them. To fix these issues, there should be regulation on hunting and demolishing forests.
The loss of biodiversity occurs mainly because of animal hunting in excess and their forced relocations. Firstly, It is clear that when species are endangered, they should not be hunted. However, as they are few left alive, their value increases drastically, and this results in attracting more people to hunt them. For example, the White Tiger is a popular pet amongst the Sheiks because there are only a few handful remain in the world. Secondly, due to industrialization and deforestation, several species are forced to find an alternative habitat. Unfortunately, most of them fail to do so and perish, such as the Kiwi brid, which is extinct now.
One solution to this problem might be to have strict regulations in place for hunting animals and an alternative home with similar environment for their relocation prior to demolishing their homes. If animals are kept safe, such as in reserves or sanctuaries, they will flourish and multiply in diversity. And if an government wants to clear out the forest for some industries, then they should carefully finds another perfect home for the species living in that area before hand, or else they should not be allowed to do so.
In conclusion, I would emphasize that laws and regulations should be implemented worldwide to stop deforestation and hunting of animals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d destroying their natural habitats are some of the major causes why the animals these days...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun handful seems to be countable; consider using: 'few handfuls', 'few handsful'.
Suggestion: few handfuls; few handsful
...gst the Sheiks because there are only a few handful remain in the world. Secondly, due to i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...the Sheiks because there are only a few handful remain in the world. Secondly, due to i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...urish and multiply in diversity. And if an government wants to clear out the fores...
^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'find'
Suggestion: find
... industries, then they should carefully finds another perfect home for the species li...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...ome for the species living in that area before hand, or else they should not be allowed to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89849433698 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0009861808 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113845337893 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432676269006 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383661014512 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066406443746 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327229171984 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d destroying their natural habitats are some of the major causes why the animals these days...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun handful seems to be countable; consider using: 'few handfuls', 'few handsful'.
Suggestion: few handfuls; few handsful
...gst the Sheiks because there are only a few handful remain in the world. Secondly, due to i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...the Sheiks because there are only a few handful remain in the world. Secondly, due to i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...urish and multiply in diversity. And if an government wants to clear out the fores...
^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'find'
Suggestion: find
... industries, then they should carefully finds another perfect home for the species li...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...ome for the species living in that area before hand, or else they should not be allowed to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89849433698 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0009861808 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113845337893 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432676269006 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383661014512 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066406443746 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327229171984 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.