Humans have progressed a lot in science and technology and we are seeing all these changes are impacting our daily life. It has affected our daily lifestyle from home to our workstations and even to our free time.
In my opinion, I believe it has been advantageous to us considering the drawbacks which are mild.
First and foremost, technology has entered at a very high rate in our mobile phones which has changed the traditional way of doing things. For instance, all the useful apps from booking a cab to hotels, ordering food
are now done on applications and each service is available to us through few clicks. There is no need of physically searching any places for hotels and finding good eateries. It saves lot of time and the person can be more productive towards their work commitments.
Secondly, Communication has been improved drastically and people feel more connected to their closed ones. Electronic devices like laptop and mobile phones are now equipped with applications which help in expanding our social circle and connecting to your loved ones. For instance, Instagram ,facebook and duo helps you connect to your friends and family who are away for a very long time and also helps you connect with your new colleagues. Office work like emails and meetings are very easy to maintain specially during these tough times where there is threat of spreading corona virus.
Thirdly, online games have a changed defination now and people from all over the country can connect and play together. Despite, these advantages people are getting more and more involved in their phones anmd electronic devices which can be harmful to an extent. However, addiction is subjective and can be taken care by persons personal habits. There are people who are quite successful in this era despite the technical growth.
In conclusion, Information technology had been a bliss to mankind because it has changed the traditional way of living, working and playing. Depending on these advancements humans would be more social , interactive and can share their thoughts on digital platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10465116279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69447379574 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1307754123 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174816427661 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546167156179 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654913966939 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825161803849 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674530729891 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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