Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, Information technology is one of the fast-growing sectors. It is influencing peoples lives in many different ways and in recent days it started to control our free time, home and other work activities. It plays a significant role in every person's day-to-day lives.
There are a plethora of pros in information technology. Information technology started to rule our home in many different medium from the smart TV to Alexa, smart home etc. Nowadays days peoples are exploring and controlling many things by sitting in a single place this happened because of the enhancement in Information technology. In leisure time people spend most of their time in different social media like Facebook, Twitter, YouTube, Instagram etc. Not only in leisure time but also some peoples tend to reduce their stress when they are alone by using these social media. Furthermore, By using this information technology everyone can communicate with every other people living around the world without much effort.
However, there will always another side for the coin. Some of the disadvantages are through the information technology people can get everything in their hand without any physical movement as a consequence it will make the people lazy. Furthermore, if people spend all their free time in social media means they won't have much time to concentrate on their hobby. So it will result in the abate of interest in human hobbies. Nowadays days peoples are getting addicted to these even at younger age itself we can see much impact on children behaviour because of this addiction. In recent days, it started controlling some peoples.
In conclusion, if people used information technology in an efficient way means the advantages overheads the disadvantages. It depends on the people using it they should not get addicted to it and also they should learn to use to efficiently to get the benefits. For children, parents should guide them to use information technology in a proper way.
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...te on their hobby. So it will result in the abate of interest in human hobbies. Nowadays...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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...uide them to use information technology in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19254658385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85138496241 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4963037484 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206836729607 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072899711342 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075992633516 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141044050053 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069491505753 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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