In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups.
Is this a positive or negative trend?
In the fast-moving world the large and joint family are becoming a rarity among the people due to varies factors. Nowadays, people in urban areas are separated from their family and leading their own life. In my view, positive overheads the negative impacts until the person knows to manage and control themselves.
The place where we work, the distance of the university from our hometown are the key factors which make the people migrate to the cities. In some cases, their whole family cannot shift to the cities for the individual due to varies reason such as their parent's job, the budget of a family, some may to not willing to as a consequence people live alone in the cities. Usually, the salary will be offered based on the cost of living in the city which they live in. Comparatively, the expenditure is less in the cities for a single person or a small family than that for a big family, so that they can save more for their future life. If the person is living alone or as a small family, there is a high probability to do their day-to-day works by themselves. As a result of that, they will learn many things such as taking care of themselves, time management, prioritizing, etc.
In the other hand, this will also introduce some negative effects in our life. It may make the person to detached more from their family as their living apart from them. This will also influence the people attitude and culture. Because of doing all the work by themselves sometimes they may be overconfident in all the situations and also they may feel too independent. Furthermore, loneliness may sometimes kill people. Lack of human contact in the home without other distractions like internet surfing, chatting, video games may make the people feel more boredom, stressed and lonely. In small family to growing children without the help of other family members like grandparents are difficult as both the parents are working professionals nowadays.
In conclusion, It depends on the people's mindset to state whether it is positive or negative because it has both positive and negative impacts. If the person managed everything properly and they maintained a positive attitude means the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
.... In conclusion, It depends on the peoples mindset to state whether it is positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93633952255 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67680921485 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506631299735 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4578222082 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.388888889 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238092945712 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732866450271 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450108795179 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144610341942 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205599993105 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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