Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our homes, leisure and work activities. To what extent does the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages.
Certainly, being rooted in our lives (homes, free-time, jobs) , the information technology is causing great impact whether in the form of gadgets or any other medium. Like all things, it does have a big catalogue of pros and cons. In my perspective, the merits dominates it's demerits.
On one hand, information technology or IT as many people call it aids humans a lot in making their lives more convenient by the utilities it developes. For instance, now icomputers now makes it more comfortable and less time consuming to have the facsimiles of text by printing than the earlier way of typing. Nevertheless, it also gives us the freedom, more resources to learn,earn income, also have control over our lives and time.for example, nowadays, people can work, study through distance learning programmes, order and sale goods from different states and countries from the comfort of their homes through the assistance of mini-computers and phones.
Moreover, IT is a major employer round the world because of it needs of enough and competent manpower to satiate it's numerous product resources thereby benefitting the growing population by combating unemployment. For instance, one who read English language, Linguistic or Foreign languages can be employed in an IT company as a secretary, customer care representative or a brand ambassador.
On the other hand, it's demerits as effect on human lives too. Such as increase on Cyber crime which as resulted in hacking of personal information on the Internet since most of banking transactions, other forms of trade which has led to increase fraudulent crimes. This has caused a great deal of headache to the government and likewise other individuals. It's a dark side that needs not be forgotten.
To sum up, IT is a developing field that has both positive and negative influence on our lives and daily activities but the former is more and suppresses the later as it's a vital role in our lives that can't be easily neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11076923077 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9300901875 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612307692308 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4289554638 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201117561931 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588609642783 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630064038052 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101565124657 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670630314457 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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